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IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 12:36:21 AM in AEST
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Blow wind blow, secretwind.
Not to worry got a safety net.
For if it sinks I'll abandon ship.
Go down with the ship, fo get it!
You said,
"Don't worry emy,
If your ship sinks I'll resque you."
Now a true friend you surely are.
No worries for country gal, emystar.
A gals gotta have inspiration to write.
Even if she has to sleep alone.
Heck, that she don't really mind.
At least she understands, gentle, kind.
My heart's free-n-clear, uh huh.
Being a poet is my main thing.
Nuthing much else gets done
But I'm happy, free, oh yea, hon.
Freinds like you so rare, true.
Life's so fragile, often unkind.
Secretwind, blow this way any time.
Friendship like this will always be mine.
Thanks friend for being there.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy
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emystar
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:55:54 AM AEST
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| A very nice dedication and statement of love. |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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I am truly blessed to have a friend like you.
The wind |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by wizard on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 08:47:28 AM AEST
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wow emy,
what a great dedication...your feelings come through nicely.
wiz |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:47:41 AM AEST
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| very nice dedication and can relate to some of those words thanks for sharing |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 03:08:11 AM AEST
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wow
very good write
hugs |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 12:30:35 PM AEST
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BRAVO! dear Emy Rose for your feet!
Friends that rescue are so rare and yet,
when you find one like SecretWind..........
what a wonderful treat!
Loved this
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 12:24:41 AM AEST
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I like this poem and as a song even more. Got a folky feel 2 it em' you just keep writting
them and being you. They sound as free as the wind i can just see you singing them as you write them. Great work emy always consistant.
((((((emystar))))))))))
Ben
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 07:47:04 PM AEST
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You two are so wonderful, what a blessing this is to read, smiles all the way
Hugs,
RaquelLeah |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:51:52 AM AEST
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You and I have been on this site together for a while, emy. It's about time I commented on your work, huh?
As everyone else said, this was a pleasure to reda - lighthearted dedication poem and I sense there is something just under the surface that intices me to smile about it.
Thanks much. |
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Re: IF YOUR SHIP SINKS
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 06:00:44 AM AEST
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| A friend suggested I read some of your works. I am glad I took their advice. You show some good styles in your words. |
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