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..a toast
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 12:04:49 AM in AEST
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Yes, death is at the bottom of the cup-
everyone that lives must drink it up
and yet between the sparkle at the top
and blackest lees where lurk that bitter drop,
there swims enough cheer Heaven knows
to cease our hearts and all our woes.
The bubbles rise in light at the brim
while bitter drops remain far and dim;
the liquid spreads and paints our dreams
that in the glad delirium seems,
by all the light if you've a will:
no mighty drop should lose its thrill~
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Re: ..a toast
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by Kevin on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 12:17:19 AM AEST
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great poem. I loved the symbolism and imagery you used. I read three times in a row just soaking it all in. Really great write.
-Kevin |
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Re: ..a toast
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:59:41 AM AEST
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Great writing as always, friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ..a toast
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:45:53 AM AEST
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A very bold statement about life...then death.
Very well penned.
Tim |
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Re: ..a toast
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:53:35 AM AEST
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| wow good job! i really enjoyed reading this. keep it up! |
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Re: ..a toast
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by wizard on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 08:36:42 AM AEST
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hey bro,
i love the analogy of drinking from the cup of life..nice write!
wiz |
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Re: ..a toast
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:56:21 AM AEST
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I'm always rather impressed with your writes, Billy, but I must confess, I have no clue what to say about this one. I do want to say something because it is well done, but I don't know what.
I think the symbolism is wonderful, and the title just tops it off.
Good write.
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: ..a toast
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:00:33 AM AEST
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oh absolutely fantastic. the symbolism, metaphors..gorgeous descriptions, so dark, loved it.
~natalya |
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Re: ..a toast
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:49:38 AM AEST
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| another awesome write you are magnificent thanks for sharing |
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Re: ..a toast
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by wolf_tamer on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:38:57 PM AEST
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wow! exquisit flow. i enjoyed this so much.
~wolf~ |
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Re: ..a toast
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by brew on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:07:20 PM AEST
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To begin, and end.yet not really ending.! Great write..Loved the whole analogy .As always , a enjoyable write from thee......
ALways
Brew~ |
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Re: ..a toast
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 04:11:48 PM AEST
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hmmmm , I am not sure why you posted this as dark poetry.
I love the comparison of life in the glass. Like a good wine,
it is to be savoured and thoroughly enjoyed to the end.
Excellent musings, dear Billy and as per usual,
exceptionally conveyed.
~Breezy
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Re: ..a toast
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 07:10:46 PM AEST
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Billy~
I like the way you bring ur poem across to ur reader. Like one is drinking from the cup of life. The symbolism, descriptiveness and imagery outstanding. You have always been able to captivate ur reader with ur excellent and very well quilled writes Billy~ A true master in all poetic verse. Well done my dear friend.
love from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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