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Share My world
Contributed by
BRONZEN
on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:16:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let me finally open myself up to you
feel my energy and let it seep through
Adventure what Ive been holding back
touch my hands feel the warmth recovering
from lack
Caress my mind its open for you to read
my eyes tell all please be ready to receive
Share my world no one has ever visited the
whole me
Im finally realizing Im ready to take that leap
I can withstand the pain of loves up and downs
no more loneliness Im ready to accept love
right now
I want you in every way you always wanted me
my world is in amiss you can come in and make
it right and bounty
Put your hand on my chest and sense my hearts
reveal
I want you to take all the love thats been concealed
Share my world no matter what obstacles you may
find
Share my world so in myself I wont continue to drown
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
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2006-06-16 15:16:58]
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Re: Share My world
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 05:30:29 PM AEST
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Yes.. open up.. well my heart is open for sure, have at it, take all the love, I need to have some of it taken too... and not to worry, there is more from where it comes from.. Lovely inspiring poem my dear friend... I just love how you move my heart and soul with your magnificent writing.. your poems are a blessing...
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Re: Share My world
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 06:45:05 PM AEST
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This is very honest and revealing of your self a bit on the innocent side as well. I'm sure it
is most sincere. A very powerful and emotional write. all the best 2u. in your quest 4 love.
Ben |
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Re: Share My world
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 07:13:05 PM AEST
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..a very gentle and precious romantic plea - I love the absence of puncuation as well.. makes for more powerful sentiments I think~
B |
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Re: Share My world
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 07:59:57 PM AEST
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A beautifully penned write filled with such softness and true romantic plea.
I thoroughly enjoyed this thanks so much for sharing it with us.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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