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HELP ME!!
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 07:56:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You talk about the death of love
what is this about?
have you fallen out of love with me?
why didn't you tell me?
You tell me that everything is going
to be just fine
and that you want me to be myself.
Of that I have tried
and continue to try every day.
I am not perfect
nor do I claim to be
I am a jerk, and I don't like it.
I am a caged animal caught
in a trap that encloses on me.
I want to be free, I need to be free
I want to be me, I need to be me
and soar the never-ending skies
with ease.
Love never really dies
it just changes over time
if you say that love dies
then God is a liar.
If God is a liar than why
do I try to serve Him?
that is my question
that is my plea
Help me to find the answer
Help me, PLEASE, HELP ME!!
My one true love, PLEASE HELP ME!!
I am begging you to try and help me,
help me bring back myself.
O My God, PLEASE HELP ME!!
I am crying out to You to come and
save me, to bring me back to life.
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
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2006-06-16 07:56:08]
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Re: HELP ME!!
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by Alison on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:28:24 AM AEST
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| ok, well u really need a better order in this write, its too uneven, and it just kinda rants on and on, so u might want to try and find a better way to word some of it and add somethings in it to make it flow better. but the idea, the feeling in it is good. just my thoughts. good write |
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Re: HELP ME!!
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by bronzen on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:31:57 PM AEST
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| I kind of understan what your trying to say but always look to God for answers if you can't get them anywhere we can't put our faith in humans to tell us and god is not the issue for our downfalls in relationship or etc. He's the answer to the problems |
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