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trust me
Contributed by
wolf_tamer
on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:49:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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i need you to look around
you'll be surprised with what you've found
what you find, you will find weird
it's something our family has always feared
but if i ever told you this
you'd wave me off, like some kind of diss
but to tell you the truth, i'm worried as ****
and so far with you, i've had no luck
in changeing what you will become
and, trust me, you won't find it fun.
because who you, so far, will be
is someone you never, ever wanna see
you may have some idea of who i'm thinking
your turning into him as fast as blinking
so listen to me when i say this
and please, don't take it a diss
cause this is what i have to say
and trust me, this is no game i play
so go ahead and have your fun
but your turning into your fathers son.
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wolf_tamer
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2006-06-16 00:49:40]
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Re: trust me
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:52:59 AM AEST
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| strong message, i have friends like this too, i wish they'd listen more, the last 2 lines are the most hard hitting, they make the poem |
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Re: trust me
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:04:55 PM AEST
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fantastic write, sends a strong message, good rhythem, the end really does give it some irony, a bitter chuckle.
~natalya |
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