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If I had wings...
Contributed by
bluestars
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Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:38:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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If I had wings...
I would fly high into the sky,
to escape from all this pain.
If I had wings...
I would travel around the world,
for I know that's the only way I will see it all.
If I had wings...
I would go to the moon,
and look at the stars that shine upon your face.
If I had wings...
I would go to the beach,
and sit on the sand and dream about us
walking here someday hand in hand.
If I had wings...
I would fly to you,
and I would say...
"Let me be your wings so I can guide you to my
world for I know that there our love will never fade away."
And if you were here,
and I had wings...
then they would disappear,
for you are the only reason why I would stay.
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bluestars
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2006-06-16 00:38:04]
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Re: If I had wings...
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:47:05 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written, take flight with care. May you fly as fast as your wings can carry you. Dreams are wonderful I hope that you receive yours.
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Re: If I had wings...
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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| wonderful love poem, i really feel it, the last stanza is great |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by Alison on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:49:23 AM AEST
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| wow a very beautiful write. |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by wolf_tamer on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:58:30 AM AEST
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i like this a lot, and i can relate to it very much. there are times when i wish that i had wings, i would fly so far away, and you are right. there is only one reason why i would stay. the only reason.
i enjoyed this very much. keep up the good work.
~wolf~ |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 06:27:33 AM AEST
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| nice. echoes of your other comments. |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:09:58 PM AEST
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| yes it would be nice to have wings. Thanks for posting. I wish for thee love. |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by bronzen on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:34:01 PM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:55:33 PM AEST
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A very warm, pleasant and lovely write.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:46:39 AM AEST
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This is really nice.
I have a fondness for simple poetry. Poems that say it all without overly dramatising, or embellishing.
This is wonderfully honest and straight to the point.
Good write,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by chulysnacky on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:37:39 PM AEST
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That was cool... I always use to wish I had wings. I would fly so high into the sky and yes I would go to the moon as well. Good write.
ChulySnacky |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by Traci on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 09:06:44 AM AEST
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this is very beautifully written!! i really enjoyed reading this!!
*TRACI* |
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Re: If I had wings...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:16:45 PM AEST
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sooo sweet!
love n' hugs nessa |
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