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Beauty in the Rain
Contributed by
marie
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Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:01:54 AM in AEST
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oops
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Wind dancing in little swirls
Surrounding, making beautiful.
Rain whipping down on her,
All she sees is a constant blur.
Running mascara, untidy hair.
But walking through the rain without a care.
Droplets of water caressing her face,
Falling from the sky with wonderful grace.
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marie
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2006-06-16 00:01:54]
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by wolf_tamer on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:24:49 AM AEST
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beautiful. just beautiful. thank you for the excelent read.
~wolf~ |
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:28:20 AM AEST
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| great poem, sounds like my kind of girl |
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by bluestars on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 01:50:14 AM AEST
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Great short poem
nicely written |
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 05:01:15 AM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull write.
Brings out the kid in me.
I luv the rain too.
Great writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:16:16 PM AEST
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| Very, Very nice. I love the rain. Thanks for sharing. I wish for thee love. |
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Re: Beauty in the Rain
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:57:01 AM AEST
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Oh, this is a smile inducing poem.
Nothing beats that feeling of walking through the rain and getting soaked, but not caring. Cleansing, isn't it?
I like this, it's beautifully simple, and quite original.
Well done.
Phyllis xxx |
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