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Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 09:09:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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L
etting go is sweet some people say
E
ven if it breaks your heart,
A
irports remind of transience,
V
oices of confusion shriek,
I
ncessant roar of engines,
N
owhere can be found a place of quiet.
G
ates open one by one.
I
nevitable are the last heartbreaking good byes,
S
eparation for good is at hand.
L
ong shadows fall on the tarmack
O
nly to increase the intuition of finality,
V
isitors look on detachedly,
I
ndifferent to pangs of anguish,
N
ever guessing what you feel,
G
od alone knows the extent of grief,
© Elizabeth Dandy
Copyright ©
Elizabeth_Dandy
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2006-06-15 09:09:48]
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 10:39:37 AM AEST
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Elizabeth, I love the unique form and the content as well. I agree with Jarred, this is easily one of your best writes.
Your friend,
Butch |
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 01:08:57 PM AEST
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| this is different. i like the style used. very creative keep it up! |
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 09:19:53 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Elizabeth... Love both the content and the form...
Hugs
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 05:40:26 PM AEST
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Dearest Mother Elizabeth:
Yes, He certainly does know all of that pain... all the grief, and all of those that left Him in His darkest hour... even as He lived and learned the hard way, He came back with love, just like when He departed... your poem can show that we all need to do the very same thing, to learn from pain and grief and instead of exiting, we need to come back and revisit what we learned from that place where we felt so many feelings... I love the style of your poem and all of its message.. title .. all..
Hugs,
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by sararose1950 on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:08:43 AM AEST
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Hugs dear Elizabeth- very well put, until one loses someone close (myself, was my husband and my father) it is hard to comprehend the path of grief one walks alone inside.
Peace and Light, Sara |
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Re: Leaving is Loving - A C R O S T I C
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:09:27 AM AEST
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Very Original, Very Unque dear ED.
Your form was delightful indeed!
The emotions you brought up in my heart as I finished your read!
Tremendously emotional for me!
I've walked that path dear ED.........this write was exceptional, thank you for sharing it with me!
Warm love and hugs
consue |
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