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Crying Inside
Contributed by
sparksy
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Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 06:37:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Not one seems to understand
A laugh echoes round the room
Why can't they all see
I'm crying inside
The sun has faded from the sky
The memory never hurts you
Then why I am seeing faces
When I'm crying inside
My best friend leads the laugh
His face glowing like the sun
I feel tear fall off my nose
When I'm crying outside
A girl walks over, pats my arm
Her warm presence around me
A kind smiles on her face
As I'm crying outside
She takes my arm
She leads out the way
A friendly hug passed between us
When I'm crying no more
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2006-06-15 06:37:05]
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Re: Crying Inside
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:27:26 PM AEST
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Nice write..
God Bless! |
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Re: Crying Inside
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by wizard on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 06:58:59 PM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Crying Inside
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by bluestars on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:06:11 AM AEST
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Good poem
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