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Walking Away Tired
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:29:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Erasing me with every breath you take,
This pain inside of me continues to ache.
I’m tired of lying,
I’m tired of hiding,
And nothing I do can change the way I fade in your thoughts,
These memories become lost.
I’m finally crying…guess that’s makes it easier for you,
Your wish has come true.
I acted as though I didn’t care,
But that was fake,
You where aware.
I’m tired of crying,
Tired of dying inside.
I beg for you to hear me way out there,
Away from me now,
You asked for my heart,
When you knew it was broken,
And all of these words back and forth are misspoken.
I’m tired of being tired,
I’m tired of being wired.
I want to feel freed from this game that we are playing,
I’m sorry… I’m not staying.
I have to let this go,
Before it takes anymore control.
This beast it is bigger than what we knew we were creating,
And my heart isn’t reading for all of this aching… so soon.
I’m tired so please let me go,
I have nothing more to hide and nothing more to show.
Copyright ©
Lo2681
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2006-06-15 02:29:13]
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by wizard on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 05:51:26 AM AEST
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a saddening write indeed...i feel your pain.
nicely done!
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:28:22 AM AEST
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| Very sad but very meaningful.The words are awesome. Loved it . Sue xx |
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:49:55 AM AEST
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Lo~
My dear friend I have missed you so.
A very sad, deep and heartfelt write. Sadly some of the best writes come from a pained and wounded heart. I'm so sorry u feel like this and I wish u much brighter days ahead sweetie. Someday real soon u shall find a sweet loving person who shall be worthy of ur love and ur beautiful heart. May the pain and sorrow be washed away and may it be replaced with love, joy and happiness always and forever. Take care my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 12:07:54 PM AEST
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U certainly picked the right topic catagory for
this poem.Sad is an understatement here. A
great style u have and written with conviction
well done. I'm convinced. *****
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 10:08:43 AM AEST
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Very good write, I really liked it, thanks,
2sdyx |
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 07:20:09 PM AEST
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Lo ... oh gosh that last line is altogether brilliant!!
And the first line ... good gracious! Incredibly heart-
ripping!
A very sad, albeit truthful show of emotions here.
I hope things are better for you soon ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Walking Away Tired
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:39:43 AM AEST
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| So sad but beautiful truly know how you feel. xxxxx |
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