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Should I?
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:43:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Sweet temptation
Dark and delicious
Power over me
Lustful taste
Complete control
My hunger
Realising love
Smooth movements
Over my tongue
Slowly escaping
Seductively
Bringing me to the edge
With every bite
No control
Lost in ecstasy
My mind
Overrun
My body
Possessed
Responding
To every sensation
The thought
The taste
Should I
Should I take another bite
Of chocolate…
KarlaMarie
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KarlaMarie
... [
2006-06-14 20:43:41]
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Re: Should I?
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by brooken_22 on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 09:46:30 PM AEST
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great ending. i thought it was a little dirty there for a second. lol
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Re: Should I?
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by Mixed_Emotional_Girl on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 12:06:59 PM AEST
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| Very good, a little bit of humour at the bottom was very well done. Keep up the good work |
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