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Solitude
Contributed by
BRONZEN
on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Ive been lots of places
and filled numerous of spaces
Ive had magnitudes of enjoyments
and lived a life of flamboyance
Life couldnt had gotten any better
my career flourished
and is tied to me like a tether
Yet Im in need of solitude
to keep the beast inside me calm
letting go of all my frustrations
while dealing with my every qualm
Lose myself for just one day
sit and stare out onto the lonesome bay
Leave all my cares for a minute in the wind
to soothe my soul and spirit
so together theyll mend
My friends and family area calling
wanting to get together
they are my bonds
which are tied to me I dare not sever
Solitude is all I need
so I wont become emotionally coarse
peace and serenity is my necessity
to pinpoint my weaknesses and its source
Peers of mine are not understanding
when I try to explain it
seems Im grandstanding
Solitude is all I need my
spirit has become interrupted
Burying my head in my hands
to get a depiction of all that is of substance
Im shutting my doors and closing my blinds
Im going to leave the rest of the world behind
Just for a day I need this for me
to re-defy the essence of my being
Im turning the phones off
and dimming the lights
just to watch the sunset as it rises
My eyes are heavy and Im falling
into a silenced deep sleep
dreaming my steps are becoming lighter
with no weighted endurances
upon my feet
Im in a place of sweet ecstasy
my mind is recovering with peace
my body is light as a feather
and my heart is suddenly appeased
My outer appearance is glowing
refined from the overexertions of life
my eyes are filled with elation
so wide and so bright
My soul is renewed without conscious
with my spirit being high as a cloud
I want to stay here a little while longer
and endure this sacred mound
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
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2006-06-14 19:36:30]
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Re: Solitude
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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hey bronzen, nicely done!!!
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Re: Solitude
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:09:38 PM AEST
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These lines are so me (just ask my dad)
Im shutting my doors and closing my blinds
Im going to leave the rest of the world behind
once again, a lovely write!
KarlaMarie |
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Re: Solitude
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:46:26 AM AEST
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| On my own, yes I like my own space too. Very well written. What a wonderful place. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work. Sue x |
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Re: Solitude
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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I, and I'm sure many others can definately relate to this piece. I could feel the frustration and then the release as followed you along in this tale.
Well done! |
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Re: Solitude
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST
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| I feel the flow on this write. |
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