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rain dancer
Contributed by
wolf_tamer
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Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:26:57 PM in AEST
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~6-12-06~
the pooring rain
beats down on her body
but she doesn't care
as long as she can dance
as she dances
all her pain goes away
her troubles are gone
all she does is dance
in the sky there's a crash
of thunder and lightning
she isn't scared though
its the beat to her dance
with every crash of thunder
every flash of lightning
and every beat of the rain
she dances
and all her troubles go away.
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2006-06-14 19:26:57]
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Re: rain dancer
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:28:50 PM AEST
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I wrote one like this and yours is better...lol
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Re: rain dancer
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 01:05:49 AM AEST
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awesome write wolf..
..very uplifting and fresh~
I love the rain.. as for dancing: (only the slow ones..lol)
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Re: rain dancer
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:06:53 PM AEST
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Oh if it were only true. Good write
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