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one last time
Contributed by
co_cane13
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Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 06:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i close my eyes one last time
and go to hell for my crimes
rotting fliesh hangs from walls
they bleed in pain, as blood it falls
it drips upon a weary soul
and dries upon the burning coal
my eyes tear in thoughtless pain
and my mind it fights to stay sane
my temples begin to tighten
as my soul, it grows frighten
the fire rages and burns my soul
as i fall through and endless hole
I scream in agony as I am falling
as I hear the Devil's demons calling
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Re: one last time
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by bronzen on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 06:44:55 PM AEST
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| so heartfelt and kind of deep to be written at such a tender age |
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Re: one last time
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by wolf_tamer on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:23:00 PM AEST
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very strong write. i enjoyed this a lot.
~wolf~ |
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