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love you dad
Contributed by
catz77
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Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:10:07 PM in AEST
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a man once asked me
"why are you so beautiful?"
i thought for a second
yhinking he was looking for an answer
i looked into his eyes and said
"daddy, its bacause you love me"
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Re: love you dad
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:22:52 PM AEST
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If I had to write all my poems in stone, I would learn brevity of expression! You seem to have already learned. The amount of information these six lines proffer is enormous, you smart little girl! Might proofread a little closer before your posts. "yhinking" was a big bump in a brevity poem. Ya ain't got a lot o' words to hide typos and misspells in. Wonderful write and I hope your "papi" got a copy of this.
wabl
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Re: love you dad
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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| So Sweet |
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Re: love you dad
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by caz241182 on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 03:25:14 PM AEST
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| aww this is so sweet keep up the good work nice 1 |
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