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Always on My Mind
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
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Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:50:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She dreams about him; tosses and turns, can’t get him out of her head. She holds the ring right next to her, tied around her neck and on her left finger. She holds it tight, as if holding him, because he’s just everything she ever wanted.
She wishes he could have been there, holding her until she fell asleep, because she misses him so much; she wants to cry until she can’t see. She remembers the last night, giving him a kiss goodbye, wanting to bring him with her.
She just couldn’t sleep with all this on her mind.
“I love you!”
“I love you so much!”
She screams, hoping he will hear.
Silence makes the night intolerable, so she sits on some unfamiliar porch and begs to go back home. All those stupid words she said before are on her mind again. All she knows is she loves him.
She holds the ring close to her face, letting the moonlight catch the ruby. Those words he wanted to say are on her mind, and she says “yes” to them over and over again.
Sure they’re young, but who really cares? Loves starts today.
Night ends so softly and he’s still on her mind. “I love you.” She repeats over and over again, because he’s always on her mind.
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Re: Always on My Mind
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by wolf_tamer on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:28:19 PM AEST
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i can deeply relate to this. all the time. crapy feeling to miss someone that much. but all that missing is made up at the first moment you see him again. it somehow is all worth it.
good write
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Re: Always on My Mind
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by bluestars on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 12:59:56 AM AEST
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Nice way of putting out your emotions.
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