|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I QUIT
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 05:50:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
If only I could have a fag,
just one tiny little drag,
the feel of one between my fingers,
the smell of smoke that always lingers,
Huh!! do I want to smell like that ?
im really scared I will get fat,
it ruins, your health, teeth and skin,
it really does not keep you thin,
when I was sad and I cried,
they helped me commit suicide,
now im happy and I know,
its not the way I plan to go,
Smoking really is no joke,
staggering through life in a cloud of smoke,
always wheezing, always coughing,
every one a nail in your coffin.
Can feel your health getting worse,
visions of a horse drawn hearse,
well now that I am smoke free,
im on my 100th cup of tea...
Oh well you have to be addicted to something.
Copyright ©
lillyjane
... [
2006-06-13 05:50:14]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I QUIT
(User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 05:57:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i quit 9 years ago...such a relief!!!
nice write!
wiz |
|
|
Re: I QUIT
(User Rating: 1 )
by liindso14 on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 08:44:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
im 14 years old and ive been addicted to cigarettes for almost 2 years.
ive tried to quit like 5 times buts its soooo hard! i go through like a pack or more a week.this poem is really descriptive of what it can do to you and how important it is to stop.
i like this poem:) |
|
|
Re: I QUIT
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 02:59:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| liindso14 I am glad it may help you to stop you should sfop now your only 14. smoking is so bad for you and my poem does not tell you half the things smoking causes. xxxx |
|
|
Re: I QUIT
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 06:14:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I guess I have to be honest... I'm still addicted! It's those empty promises that are the worst... you know, this is the last one, but then... well... it's bad for you, but I like it. A good poem though, maybe my skins just a little too thick to be inspired to stop... but god, I love my cancer sticks. haha! Nice write, good one,
2sdyx |
|
|
Re: I QUIT
(User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well done Lillyjane, keep it up. I loved the bit about each one of them being a nail in your coffin. From the comments you have for this poem it looks as though you have been very encouraging for others to stop, (one so young they should never have started!) It's surprising who you can reach with your writing and you certainly have. Keep it up, it's inspirational! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
