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Tell Me
Contributed by
bluestars
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Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:28:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tell me now,
that you're with her
is your life how,
you wished it were?
Does she write you poems,
that blow you away?
Does she sing you songs,
that make you want to stay?
Is she all you ever wanted?
Like, I once was.
Is she all you ever needed?
And, make you smile, just because.
Does she say she loves you?
Like, I always will.
Do you love her too,
or have feelings for me still?
Are you happy now?
Like, you said you would be with me.
Does she know how,
you said together we would always be?
If, this is the case
Tell me...
I'll be happy for you
I'll know now that we are through.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2006-06-13 02:28:16]
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Re: Tell Me
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:41:56 AM AEST
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| cliche, emotional still, but cliche |
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Re: Tell Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:59:46 PM AEST
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| emotional, and well written. |
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