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My Path is Chosen
Contributed by
xxTiaxx
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Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The world means nothing
What good is life when you are not here?
My vision is blurry
Everything seems so unclear
Do you enjoy the pain you cause?
You tear me apart,
to the tip of every bone,
To the bottom of my heart.
I rather die than be fooled again,
so that is the path I choose.
In this game, I cannot win,
But then again I cannot lose.
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xxTiaxx
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2006-06-13 02:14:59]
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Re: My Path is Chosen
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:20:30 AM AEST
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to the tip of every bone i like this line
but the last two lines confused me |
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Re: My Path is Chosen
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:22:02 AM AEST
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I really like the first two line
The world means nothing
What good is life when you are not here?
amazing |
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Re: My Path is Chosen
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by lostsubconscience on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:55:42 AM AEST
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| good write. I've been down that path, and i can understand what you mean |
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Re: My Path is Chosen
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by carebear_06 on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:21:20 PM AEST
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| interesting poem. i liked it. |
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Re: My Path is Chosen
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 10:16:53 AM AEST
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| great write i liked the last stanza the best but it was all great |
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