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Fast to Rest
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 10:55:15 PM in AEST
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For that thy face is fair, I love thee not,
Nor yet because the light of brownest eyes
Capture gleam of wonder and surprise,
Like woodland streams and a sunlight where
Your essence and beauty..are without impair
And perfect: absent of disguise..
Pure as an evening paradise...
For all these things I love thee not:
But for something in thy form and face
Your looks and ways of harmony
A certain soothing charm and grace
That brings the warmth of Nature's breast
While in your arms and sinking fast to rest.
B - 2006
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 11:02:59 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
someone is fortunate.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by wizard on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 11:10:38 PM AEST
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beautiful write bro..
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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Billy~
How breath takingly beautiful. Your words are mesmerizing and you leave ur reader with such a tranquil feeling. To love for ones heart than their looks. For beauty comes from within and reflects on the outside. A most fortunate and lucky Miss whom so ever this is written for. She should count her lucky stars to be loved by a very special and extraordinary guy. Hats off to ya Billy~ Another brilliant masterpiece penned to perfection.
love always from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 11:22:34 PM AEST
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..not a sonnet ~ my apologies..
(less a line)
..though still, wayward.. applies lol
B
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:28:09 AM AEST
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Billy ,
This poem does take the breathe away!!! I just love the images that fill my mind as I read this, truely beautiful my friend
Hugs LG |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:56:26 AM AEST
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(((((Billy)))))
That is such a beautiful write.
I am impresss.
hugs |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by lostsubconscience on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:52:16 AM AEST
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| wow that was very beautiful. My mind was at peace.. |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:02:07 AM AEST
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I like the style you wrote this with---pointing out why you don't love her first, then finishing with the effectively smooth reasons why you do : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Fast to Rest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 07:36:00 PM AEST
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Sweet Billy~
What an incredibly soft and gentle thing of beauty! (You know, I think
it may have brought a tear to my eye). I am stilled at how remarkable
you capture a feeling- a thought- a sweet sentiment. And ever more
impressed at how well you pen each and every one. Stunning!
Such a loving write. Completely breath-taking. I love it entirely.
It is utter perfection. I can't say enough about this- or the author.
~Breezy
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