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Rain
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Put your arms around me
Don't ever let me go
Kiss my lips
Whisper softly
How much you love me so
You are me dark angel
My demon with white wings
The lover who has brought me gifts
Of treasured little things
The keeper of my happiness
My future groom to be
The rain upon my petals
Is what you are to me
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2003-02-08 05:30:00]
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Re: Rain
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by hazelnut on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 09:06:42 AM AEST
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| aahh....romantic |
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Re: Rain
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:47:18 PM AEST
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| beautifully written ... very lovely write |
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:40:38 AM AEST
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| purely a lover's poem... |
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Re: Rain
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:16:47 PM AEST
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Great rhythmic piece Candice,
Very sweet and to the point with it's clear, thoughtful message.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Rain
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 07:01:08 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you like this one. I personally thought that it got my message across but I wasn't sure that other people would see exactly what I was saying.
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