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(I Couldn't Say)
Contributed by
BRONZEN
on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where does my heart lie
what do you see when you look in my eyes
Am I torn between the love of you and me
or am I just settling not letting my heart be free
( I Couldnt Say )
You came along and turned my gray skies blue
do I feel just friendship or is it romance too
It seems we are getting closer but we are two worlds apart
am I in-love with you or am I infatuated with whom you are
( I Couldnt Say )
I often think of myself before I think of you
could it be I havent allowed your words to be true
Maybe my heart has been locked too long with no one owning the key
or maybe Ive accepted being alone and thats the way its supposed to be
( I Couldnt Say )
When I look in your eyes I see the reflection of myself
It seems Im inside you looking at me asking for your help
But my face shows content when I look at you your very special
can it be Im in-love or do I like the idea or maybe Im just in denial
( I Couldnt Say)
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BRONZEN
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2006-06-12 18:19:51]
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Re: (I Couldn't Say)
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by wizard on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:22:24 PM AEST
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very nicely done!
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Re: (I Couldn't Say)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:09:36 PM AEST
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A most true 2 heart poem in every way, a lovers question we have all asked if not wondered about. Very sincere i like the tittle and the heading says it all, how many times we've all blown a chance at love 4 that very reason. And it even enters into a relationship, that uncertainy that
has ended many a relationship to begin with. truly fine work.
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Re: (I Couldn't Say)
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:13:52 AM AEST
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| Beautiful can relate to your poem. xxxxx |
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