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I'm so Lonely
Contributed by
devils_denial
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Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How could you hurt me?
I can’t believe you couldn’t see,
You’ve made me feel so lonely,
I thought I was your one & only.
You say “You used to moan & moan”,
You hated me speaking to my friends on the phone,
Is that why you’ve left me all alone?
In this cold damp flat I call home.
Did I ever treat you right?
We used to always fight,
But those fights always ended with a kiss,
That kiss is what I will always miss.
What did I do wrong?
We were together so long,
I gave you all my love & devotion,
It was as deep as the deepest ocean.
You’ve shattered my heart,
That’s because you wanted us to part,
I really thought I was your one & only,
But instead you’ve made me feel ever so lonely.
By Jay Basey © 2003
Copyright ©
devils_denial
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2006-06-12 13:00:50]
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Re: I'm so Lonely
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by wolf_tamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 05:31:40 PM AEST
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don't worry, the same thing happend to me about 2 years ago. i'm completly over it, and i've been with someone else for almost a year and a half. things may get worse befor they get better, but they will almost always get better.
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Re: I'm so Lonely
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by ConcietySpawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 10:55:43 PM AEST
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| this poem kinda reminds me of my relationship in a way. anyways good write. very deep |
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