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MY FALLEN ONE
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Once again
Thoughts drifting into space
Memories of the time we spent
Memory of your face
Back I return to my dark place
Were I go to think of you
It’s were I hid even when you were still here
But I guess you never knew
Your soft caress I recall
Hand on my lips, stroke of my cheek
I miss that feeling
Oh, that special kind of weak
They said we were not ready
That we would fall into a hole
They said our love was not deep enough
Yet, it possessed my soul
My love the one and only
Everyday its you I come to see
It is the greatest joy I have
Nothing short of death, itself will ever stop me
Funny how I use that word
Death- the word I despise
It is what took you away from me
It closed your precious eyes.
I will never utter a word of farewell
It will mean you are truly gone
I know it in my heart that I will break
If I don’t refuse to mourn
In my dark place, I see you there
I visit everyday
I never want to leave you
Though the doctors say, I am slipping away
I can not eat but with you
And nor can I sleep
I fear the memories I will lose
The amazing things I wish to keep
I stay my love, my life, my husband
Your ring in my hand
I will stay in the dark place with you
No one can understand
Karla Marie
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KarlaMarie
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2006-06-12 09:27:46]
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Re: MY FALLEN ONE
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 10:57:59 AM AEST
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Karla Marie, I can understand only too well this feeling. I was there. Beautiful write about the most devastating experience I have ever known. I am amazed that you wrote this with such detail and feeling. I would have thought only those who have been there could write something like this.
Very sad, but an accurate glimpse into this most aweful feeling.
Your friend,
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Re: MY FALLEN ONE
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by irodethetrain2u on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:07:53 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful portrayal of emotions. The poems that come to us when we least expect them to always seem to be the best.
Keep writing! |
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Re: MY FALLEN ONE
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by bronzen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:33:51 PM AEST
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| very good write and emotional |
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