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A Pessimist's Advice
Contributed by
a7x36
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Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:30:08 AM in AEST
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Dawn breaks on a new day;
the last one was a nightmare,
and this one will be worse for sure.
Can anything stop today
form becoming another page
in this horror novel
known as life?
If i hold my head high,
won't someone just knock
it off my neck?
Hope for the best?
The best has come and gone.
Nothing lies ahead
but black days;
days as black as my soul.
My heart ceases to function,
black and filled with sorrow.
Hardened to the point of stone,
it can no longer beat.
I meet people with blank stares,
and those who are happy
with mere hostility.
For why be happy?
When you can be miserable!
Cry instead of laughing.
Throw away your colors for black,
the absence of all light.
Sell your soul to sorrow.
Mourn good times passed
and scowl upon those
who are happy.
Bring death to joy,
and knock out the teeth
of every smile.
Turn your back on the world.
It has nothing to offer.
Only greed, lust, and corruption.
Kill the social you,
he was lonely anyway.
Feed your stone cold black heart
with hate and loneliness.
Turn your back on the ones you loved,
that love will never be returned.
Turn the wheels of hate in your mind,
be saddistic.
Because life's not worth living
except to make everyone as miserable as you.
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a7x36
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 03:27:31 AM AEST
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Oh wow this is quite a write.
I remember feeeling this way a time or two but not any more, thank God.
good work.
huggs,
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by igba on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 04:18:15 AM AEST
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:38:02 AM AEST
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lol, i sorta had to laugh at that one, good write, and it does make sense, as pessimistic as it may be. sounds sort of like my "just a joke" one, saying that there's no point in living and those that are happy are just being ignorant. like i said, good one,
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by light_switch on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:24:16 AM AEST
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Dude, quite awesome good work you captured the emotions perfectly and i think everyone has looked at things this way atleast once
good work. |
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by KarlaMarie on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:39:20 AM AEST
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I agree with natalya, i just started to giggle half way through. But life can be a bit like that.
Any way I love the final stanza.
Turn the wheels of hate in your mind,
be saddistic.
Because life's not worth living
except to make everyone as miserable as you.
Brilliant!
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by catz77 on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:47:00 PM AEST
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i usually like to see rhymes in poems but this is
a good poem none the less.
catz |
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Re: A Pessimist's Advice
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:24:07 AM AEST
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hmmm i really liked this part the most
Sell your soul to sorrow.
Mourn good times passed
and scowl upon those
who are happy
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