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I Might Just Die
Contributed by
deadclown
on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 06:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I've got no love for nothing now
I've lost it all
I don't know how
I'm feeling empty.Incomplete
I might just die
Admit defeat
I've nothing left to offer you
You bled me dry of all I knew
You never thought to give some back
You've killed my heart and turned it black
My blood has turned to rusted tears
I'm forced to recognise my fears
It doesn't matter anymore
My soul's left dying on the floor
My mind's gone numb
My dreams have gone
I've no more thoughts for anyone
Don't trust my words
I'll only lie
Can't take no more
I might just die
Copyright ©
deadclown
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2006-06-11 18:34:59]
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Re: I Might Just Die
(User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 09:12:09 PM AEST
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Nice write, its very emotional indeed. Killing yourself because of someone is no excuse. Life sucks, thats a hard fact, but a fact that we all live with. Keep on trucking and keep the good writes coming.
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Re: I Might Just Die
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:47:06 AM AEST
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Fantastic write. flows really well, the pain becomes apparant...i loved it, and keep writing.
~natalya |
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Re: I Might Just Die
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:10:11 PM AEST
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| I really dig this flow. |
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