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Recluse for a Season
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 05:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A stony ridged appeal
where love copped a feel
Memorize the pain-
sell it for moral gain
Left standing in the rain
wash away the stain
of all that remains
Call out into the middle of the night
give up before you even fight
Once tall and proud; she comes tumbling down
avoid lady luck; she wears a frown
The gasp exerted will supercede
a burning desire for failure to succeed
The cloak of night wears heavy again
unsure where I'm headed, just where I've been.
The steam rolls off the thoughtless dew
a babbling brook of thoughts; all misconstrued
In the damp, dark earth, you lay your claim
In the still of night, I bare my shame
A failed attempt to bury comtempt; the ashes fall like sands of time
the remaining evidence of a careless crime
Salty pools of sorrow gather momentum
the heart stirs, then quiets, and goes comfortably numb
It's the regret of the time lost
the booming finality of the ultimate cost
Nights stolen away-
save for another day
It's the quickening pace of death that kills
the blood-curdling silence that chills
The stealer of breaths' discreprancy
of a curtailed life expectancy
A beating heart is the ultimate sin---
in the end you never win.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by wizard on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 06:57:11 PM AEST
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awesome scorp...such a great flow of saddness, i love it!
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 06:59:26 PM AEST
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(((((((((( Scorperiffic ! ! ! ))))))))))
OMG! I can feel the emotional plight with every word and every line in this one. This brings tears to the eyes.
A very awesome poem.
So glad to see you back and writing, even if it is a powerfully sad write like this one.
You write wonderful poems.
TIMber
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 11:08:49 PM AEST
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Your sadness is overwhelming Scorp- ..of whatever events transpired to bring this to fruition.. I am truly sorry. The work itself is exquisite..
Peace to you friend~
B |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 12:42:33 AM AEST
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OMG Scorp this is like awsome.
welcome back.
hugs |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:45:00 AM AEST
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Well friend,
I know u gotta be fellin better to get that out.
Write on. Great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 10:48:51 AM AEST
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The emotion in this reaches out and clutches at my heart.
A very felt piece.
You mirror many of my own past feelings. |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Mangos on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:43:29 PM AEST
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Its great to see you back and posting your brilliant work again…I sense a lot of hurt here…but at the same time a lot of growth too.
Nice to have you back
I’m sure the YPDC community is thrilled…..
Online pizza party for scorp’s return!?
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:58:47 PM AEST
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Scorp~
My dear friend such pain and sadness are felt and tears fill my eyes. The best sort of poetry comes sadly from what one has truly experienced. I'm so sorry for ur pain my dear friend. Chin up sweetheart.
love and big huge hugs for such a dear & sweet friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by brew on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:27:44 PM AEST
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Scropie........Man I missd you and all the work of me twin....Lol.! I see saddness, has torn the Bold and Brave down. WEll pick your self off, brush the dirt away..........and SMile again.! Make the pain that has been penned in the write, blow in the mist. Missed you
Hugs
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 07:07:09 PM AEST
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"A beating heart is the ultimate sin---
in the end you never win."
Oh Scorpy!! I am saddened by your recent couple writes, (although in utter delight and
awe that you are posting again!) Those last two lines . . . so forlorn and - final. [I know in
your heart of hearts you don't truly believe this. No true scorpio ever admits defeat!]
Part of the problem with being emotional is that when you come down from the most
incredible highs, you sink into the depths of the almost unbearable lows. [But look at
the amazing writes those wretched feelings inspire].
A masterfully written piece of YOU. Exceptional, scorpy.
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th October 2020 @ 11:51:14 PM AEST
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This IS fabulous... Absolutely fabulous....
Beyond awesome....
Incredible from a feisty vixen...
Color me totally smitten from what was written.. |
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Re: Recluse for a Season
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th January 2021 @ 02:36:00 AM AEST
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| Still loving it M&M......................😍 |
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