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When You Came
Contributed by
The_Young_Poet
on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 02:11:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just when I thought I was falling
You came and picked me up
As if God answered my calling
When I felt like I had no hope
You gave me all that I needed
And I gave up feeling like a dope
Every time I cried
You wiped each tear
And I gave up the need to sigh
Every time I thought I was useless
You made me feel like I was the only one
Making my eyes tearless
So when you came
You made every fear and tear feel tame
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2006-06-11 14:11:06]
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Re: When You Came
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by Alison on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 03:50:46 PM AEST
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| short and to the point. good write! |
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Re: When You Came
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by bronzen on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: When You Came
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:14:44 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: When You Came
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 03:32:40 PM AEST
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God, I wish someone would come and pick me up like that! A very nice poem, sweet and honest, a winning formula in my opinion! Keep up the good work,
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Re: When You Came
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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| it may be cliche but aww |
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Re: When You Came
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 10:25:49 AM AEST
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| it may be cliche but aww |
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