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Journey
Contributed by
bluestars
on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 01:56:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Being with you has been a
wonderful journey.
A journey I wish would not have
come to an end,
A movie that just keeps playing
in my head.
We shared everything for you
were my close friend.
What a journey this has been...
We traveled the world in our
wildest dreams,
we saw and climbed the highest
mountains,
we swam across the beautiful seas,
we walked through the windy deserts,
and lived through it all happily.
Now, this journey has come to an end
but the memories will never fade
because what we shared together,
can never be erased,
can never be replaced.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2006-06-11 01:56:41]
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Re: Journey
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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Very beautifull writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Journey
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by shelby on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 03:11:53 PM AEST
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a calming beautiful write, hold onto those memories and what nice ones they are.
Michelle |
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Re: Journey
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by bronzen on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:30:05 PM AEST
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| nicely written |
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Re: Journey
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:32:25 AM AEST
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Its beautiful but yet sad.
good write |
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Re: Journey
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by Lucid_Tides on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:31:34 PM AEST
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| I really like this. Shows strong meaning in the word friend. The perfect words for an amazing write. |
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Re: Journey
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by miteshwar on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 09:06:37 PM AEST
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| A great poem with resemblance to friends |
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