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Promise
Contributed by
amber_cooper
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Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 01:40:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As day breaks and night falls
I fall deper in love with you
With every smile
And every laugh
With every touch
And every kiss
I realize why I love you
You gave me hope
You gave me faith
The our love would last
Through thick and thin
I will stand by your side
Until the day comes
When I should die
That is my promise
To you
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amber_cooper
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2006-06-11 01:40:28]
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Re: Promise
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by bronzen on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:31:31 PM AEST
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| nice and from the heart |
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Re: Promise
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by bluestars on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:11:19 AM AEST
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| Great poem, very sweet. I'm sure your partner feels the same way. |
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Re: Promise
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by robbig60 on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 04:12:37 PM AEST
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Very sweet. Relative to my life too so a good read. Particularly like the line
"You gave me hope" |
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