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Just a Thing
Contributed by
irodethetrain2u
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Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 01:07:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel like your tool
Because that's what you've made me,
Because that's what I've let myself become.
A plaything that stays hidden and unthought of
On your shelf
Until you're ready
Ready to play.
Copyright ©
irodethetrain2u
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2006-06-11 01:07:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Just a Thing
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 10:35:03 AM AEST (User
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Alot of pent-up emotion conveyed in so few words...I like it in its simplicity. Welcome to YPDC, and keep up the writes : )
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Re: Just a Thing
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST (User
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Excellent write...
Housing all you inner emotion..
God Bless! |
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