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There once was a man...
Contributed by
Alison
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Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:57:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There once was a man who had no face,
Who knew no love,
And saw no grace.
He was afraid to live,
That he might fail.
He was afraid to give,
His eyes where closed for me to see not.
Shut up was his heart,
Here he was without a care nor thought.
He felt little pain and little of joy,
That is what he said was living.
As a man seen as a boy.
“I don’t know” he would cry.
Yet he would not listen nor except the truth,
Will you ever find your reasons why?
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-06-10 19:57:39]
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Re: There once was a man...
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by whiteleo1984 on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 02:27:55 PM AEST
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| he is not a man, but a boy trapped in the clutches of society, he's only a lost little boy with no one 2 look up 2 and no one cares... that's his reality and his fate. |
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Re: There once was a man...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:35:23 PM AEST
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wow. Very profound thoughts within this write.
I think you are on to something here, and you've
expressed it wonderfully.
~Breezy |
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