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*untitled*
Contributed by
SweetHeartDealer
on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Restless in the dark
Our hearts expanding
with nervous energy
Our eyes searching
for an opportunity
for trembling lips to touch
Skin grazing skin
our touch was static
jolting us awake
jolting us alive
Copyright ©
SweetHeartDealer
... [
2006-06-10 19:37:14]
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Re: *untitled*
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 08:23:27 PM AEST
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| this was actually impressive. you had a good tone, and i actually liked the last two lines a lot, which is surprising. sometimes subtle changes are the best, and you did it well. i also like your member name too, very unique, like your poem. |
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Re: *untitled*
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 05:49:11 PM AEST
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This was an excellent..
God Bless! |
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