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This is Goodbye
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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This is how it will end,
This is how I will say Goodbye.
I pushed you away from me,
And I tried to get you back,
But you just kept looking away.
So I am finished with you.
I broke your heart,
You broke mine.
I kick myself everyday for that fact.
But it is one that I will live with,
One that will burden me the rest of my life.
But my life will go on,
And Im sure yours will too.
But you touched my life,
You touched my soul,
I touched your life too,
Of that I am sure.
But this is how its going to end.
I am done.
Done with trying to talk to you,
Done with trying to see you,
Done with trying to get you back.
This is my final goodbye to you,
This is the ending of our chapter together.
This is how I say farewell.
Goodbye to you,
Farewell to you.
I am done,
This is goodbye......
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2006-06-10 17:50:12]
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Re: This is Goodbye
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:51:43 PM AEST
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| heartfelt good write |
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Re: This is Goodbye
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:53:12 PM AEST
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| nice. this write is powerful. strong words A++++ |
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Re: This is Goodbye
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 08:48:21 PM AEST
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Hang tuff friend.
Life goes on as you know.
Very good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This is Goodbye
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by lostsubconscience on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:33:19 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed your poem, very cordial..and I can actually say I know how hard it is to quit something you've put so much into. |
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Re: This is Goodbye
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by Alison on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:04:20 PM AEST
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| a very moving write, i know how you feel! great job! |
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