|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
Contributed by
emystar
on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 04:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
|
SultryRose's Signatures
Companionship is my inner crave.
Put that thing back little boy, Hey!
Too many things to go wrong.
Till now will jus sing dis song.
U jist a dirty ole man
even so give me your hand.
Play on-n-on-n-on, ole man.
repeat
Groove on ole unseattled dear man.
Someone else will hold my hand.
Call me ole fashioned, hell, don't care.
Took me a long lonely time to here.
Everything today means so much.
Can live without yo nimble touch.
Life's too short for me takin chances
So now, they'll be no romancin.
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2006-06-10 16:58:05] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
(User Rating: 1 ) by bronzen on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:30:40 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nice write it flowed |
|
|
Re: U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 08:04:25 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
lol, you tellem girl, I love this one, lol.. not sure if it was meant to be so funny, but to me it was, because so much to say about it, and so real.. oh. I won't go into it lol.. I just love it emy.. yes, make those great choices.. hold on, hold out until you truly know they are the one... priorities... top notches great and grand choices in life. rL |
|
|
Re: U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:49:51 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Emy~
You go girlfriend. You tell him exactly how ya see it. Groovy song, I like it very much.
Awesome writing Emstar.
love ya,
~*suzie Q*~ |
|
|
Re: U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
(User Rating: 1 ) by lord_sogi on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:31:47 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
out of the poems to read...this was quite an interesting one. Lol as someone above said, yeah it did seem to spark some humor in it. Especially the first stanza. Lol, hopefully people learn some respect instead of pure lust. Lol if not, I am sure this song will be sung many a time |
|
|
Re: U JIST A DIRTY OLE MAN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 07:23:17 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Mars and venus do exist. and girl you are from venus. |
|
|
|