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A heart is just a heart
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:18:53 PM in AEST
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step on to these sheets of me
silent on the floor, agree
"wouldn't you like to flee the scene?"
I know mom was once so proud
but i can't handle life so loud
"now i just adjust to sound"
nothing here reminds me of
the love i knew before i grew
nothing now can calm me down
i shake until i sleep no sound
piece me back to one whole sun
so i can be the smoking gun
"now it's safe to end this fun"
methadone i know is grown
cups of some just can't control
cravings came to send me hell
let me never come to tell
that it's all just a white flag waving....
dw
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Re: A heart is just a heart
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:35:21 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: A heart is just a heart
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:15:32 PM AEST
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You do have a way with the abstract Dwayne : )
Good to see you're still kicking about YPDC, and better yet; posting! Keep it up.
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Re: A heart is just a heart
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:56:59 PM AEST
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the title is true... it IS..after all, just a heart..
but it's what's inside that matters~
Addiction is nothing new for me..and I only find it necessary to say:
"dreams are thoughts alone.. to bring about the metamorphisis: is healing.
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Re: A heart is just a heart
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:15:45 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing . Nice write
Whisper |
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Re: A heart is just a heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:03:16 PM AEST
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Dwayne~
A heart is just a heart, but what's inside this heart is what really matters. You're brilliant work reminds me so much of an artist and his painting. A picture says a thousand words. Well done my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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