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..brooding the moment
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:05:28 AM in AEST
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...you reared and nurtured, from out the nowhere of past
with dead leaves in your hands..
even I, who'd known you all along and near,
was dumb, in a turmoil of speech.
You came out of a confusion of people
with new flowers in your hands;
from out' the Green and Gold of June..
and I had found you again, but not alone.
WK ~ 2006
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:31:02 AM AEST
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oooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuiiii
this one has a bit to it.
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:08:09 AM AEST
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brooding the moment- of undefined thought ..
abstract indeed!
there is so much more here that what is written.
Clarity and truth shall find there way in a word of
bitter acrimony. For those who wish it, it can be the
most glorious of revelations. [Though, I have been
known to enjoy a good brood or two]
~Breezy
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 03:05:39 PM AEST
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I'm liking the emotional sentiment you've expressed here Billy. Good to visit your account page once more...
Scorp. |
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by wizard on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 08:12:57 PM AEST
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another awesome write bro..such a profound thought, i love it.
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by candysears on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:02:25 PM AEST
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Words spoken from the heart
Very good write..
God Bless! |
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by brew on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:03:44 PM AEST
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| This one is with great sentiment, yet I will re-read over and over. Wonderful write of abstatact. |
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:58:37 PM AEST
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Billy~
I feel there is much more to this my dear friend. The emotional senitiments you pen for us to read are ever so heartfelt Billy~
Your natural talent in writing is amazing. You know exactly what u want ur reader to feel through ur well ascribed verses. You are truly an extraordinary poet my sweet friend. I bow to ur excellence.
love ya,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: ..brooding the moment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:32:42 PM AEST
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This was a punch in the gut, great impact especially that last line. U my friend, need 2 be teaching in tha university that starts with the letter " H " i assume jmay be a few blocks away from u there. That is when your not on some lecture tour, or book signing. Very scholarly work my new england bretheren, yet slightly fused with a twang of twain, aka. Samuel Clemons. Great work Bill.
Ben
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