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ONLY Truth
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:07:43 PM in AEST
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Open words on the screen
Meanings that have been taken in and known
Never a rude word that is displayed for the eyes to see
"only truth"
Truth that makes a smile grow bigger and brighter
Makes for "one" to know there is a true soul in the world
Inner depths that make it unable to control what lies
Twisting , swirling, and reponses that need to be let out
"only truth"
Seen through glass windows, and now they have become so clear
As clear as a painted iced over lake or pond
Breathe gasps.....because it has been seen
"only truth"
Funny as it may be, it is the time for taking "YET" away.
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brew
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:59:46 PM AEST
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Dayna~
Your poem weaves the magical words of ur beautiful heart. Wisdom and truth speak out aloud from ur write. Truth and honesty are two key factors in any relationship, be it friends or love. Well done dearest Dayna. I thoroughly enjoyed ur uplifting write. Shine on sweet girl.
love n hugs,
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 10:39:02 PM AEST
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I love your style dayna, it captivates my imagination, and your wisdom is second 2 none i start reading your poem and i don't wanna stop even when it's finished there's like a little after effect, a lull if u will, and it's like i still hear the echo ringing. love the work u do. A treasaure bar none.
((((Dayna))))
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:28:50 AM AEST
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In the oddest of ways, this makes me think of an online love affair...I'm sure that sounds ridiculous, but in a way it works...Though I think the way you worded this piece coud work as a metaphor for many a things in life/love. Your writes tend to leave the reader pondering, and that's why we always come back for more : )
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:16:30 AM AEST
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How u say so much with so few words not to mention the beauty those phrases posess and the beautiful way in which they are presented. I love your writting Dayna, live with it girl. lol.
((((Dayna))))
Ben |
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:53:06 PM AEST
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Your poem so strongly makes a point!
Yet you have done so with cleverness and artitry.
Very refreshing!!!!! |
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 04:46:28 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:27:51 PM AEST
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this has got to be one of the very best works by you yet~
..so literal and very poetic..
B. |
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 11:35:16 AM AEST
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Oh My Brew you outdid all your others with this one! Deep, truthful and for some very hurtful. So many cannot accept the truth, nor can they handle it!
This was amazing and I enjoyed it, must read it again.
Thanking you for all your wonderful comments too!
Warm love
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 08:48:33 PM AEST
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very inspiring, truth.. beautiful brew..
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:30:44 AM AEST
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Truth is this is one fine piece o' work from, I'll bet, one fine FEMALE wordsmith! How could I have been so blind? That behind us, I'll be readin' regular the posts o' Dayna - - - - brew.
wabl
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Re: ONLY Truth
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 08:59:44 PM AEST
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Only truth.
Those two words offer so much to ponder in and of
themselves Dayna. But what lies beneath those
words is a generous helping of provocative thought.
As with all your writes, dear Dayna, you have given
much to contemplate. : )
~Breezy |
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