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Lighthouse
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 05:50:09 PM in AEST
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Lighthouse how quiet you stand there
all strouded in mystery
The tales of so many ships steered in from the waves below
Many years, the waters lay surrounding your feet ,
Crushing blowing forces, a few remembered ,
Sinkings or two
The Lighthouse Light Beackoning
and ever watching
over the rocky torrid seas
Forever shining beams
steadfast
Keeping the fishing ships safe
The light that had guided my fisherman
home
The time of their Use
is diferent now
Every thing Is Electricial
But in the glory days ,
when the winds blew and the waters rose
"By Thundering Jesus "
Those Lighthouses they always lit the way.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2006-06-09 17:50:09]
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Re: Lighthouse
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by bronzen on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 07:12:05 PM AEST
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| beautiful write |
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Re: Lighthouse
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 10:47:07 PM AEST
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Oh Whisper how special was your poem.
Lightouses have always come alive for me somehow, how I love them and can even hear them talk. If only they could speak to us and tell us about their adventures, and memories of old. I feel so sad that most are long gone.
What a memorable write! Beauteous poetry, just right!!!!
Warm love
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Re: Lighthouse
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by Adelle on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:53:35 AM AEST
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so stinking cool! i love this write-
really inspirational:)
thanks for sharing your talents on here with all of us readers...
i loved it
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Re: Lighthouse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 04:23:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem but of course being from new england and adoring light houses the tittle alone hooked me, lol. wether or not i read the poem i would still coment. but i'm glad i read it, such a sweeping feeling i got from it carried away if u will. just lovely.
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Re: Lighthouse
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 05:52:32 PM AEST
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A wonderful for write..Nice reading
God Bless! |
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