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Falling Stars
Contributed by
xlguesswho14xx
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Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
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The stars have fallen from overhead
LIke the breaking of porcelain, glass flies everywhere
And light is now imperceptible from our limited view
Since darkness has now become our only dim light
Desperately lost, I confusedly roam about
Endlessly looking for a sign of hope or a feeling of happiness
Through the fallen pieces of debris and rubble
Of all those once bright stars that luminated the overhead dome
Everything has gone dark and black
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2003-02-08 02:40:00]
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Re: Falling Stars
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:51:18 AM AEST
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| there is something in us all that draws us to this darkness, another good poem |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by xlguesswho14xx on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 06:37:43 PM AEST
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| thank you for your comments. When I first wrote these poems, I had no idea if I was doing it right or not. I know this sounds kind of lame, but what you said means alot to me. |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:18:08 PM AEST
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| i really like this - dark without being morbid, tragically beautiful without being morose. i love the image of the stars falling and shattering like glass. great write, read some of mine if you like, keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: Falling Stars
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:08:01 AM AEST
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| Great write, about how things, when they go horribly wrong, can leave us in ruins. Bravo. |
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