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HAIKUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
fenster666
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Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:36:54 AM in AEST
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haikus are awesome,
they rule over all poetry,
shakespeare was a jerk
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Re: HAIKUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 11:27:25 AM AEST
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Perfeact form.. I am glad that you like Haikus...
Take care
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Re: HAIKUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:50:14 PM AEST
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I like haiku too. It is poetry in its purest form. I think you have one syllable too many in your second line. I counted 8 instead of 7. Also, I don't understand the last line. You don't really believe that do you? Have you ever read Shakespeare' s poetry? Talk about awesome....Have a great weekend.
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Re: HAIKUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by spider on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 04:03:30 PM AEST
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| lol, *loves* |
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Re: HAIKUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 06:05:11 PM AEST
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Not bad... I would have to disagree with you about Shakespeare though. Keep it up.
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