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~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:20:34 PM in AEST
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You hide behind your smile
For it shades the tears you cry
Reminiscing on times once shared
You ask yourself the question why?
There are reasons why you hide your heart
From a world torn by love and change
In the blink of an unwatchful eye
Sadness slipped into your heart’s range
Happy moments called memories
Once sheltered you from such pain
After you said your final goodbye
Broken dreams and promises now reign
Will the tears ever stop falling
Your heart now feels so incomplete
The sacrifice you made for love
Hangs your head down in defeat
Believe in your dreams again
True love is in store for you
You have such a willing soul
That will help see you through
The moon and the shining stars
Open up the doors for chance
Where love shall meet eternity
And you a wild and hot romance
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eternal_dreamer
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:46:47 PM AEST
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What an absolutely beautiful poem for two wonderful guys......It's so full of hope and inspiration. Thay are both very lucky to have a friend like you...
I wish the same for them...
Jenni |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:43:49 PM AEST
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UHHHHHHhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuu.
What Jenni said.
It's great to read a new post from u my friend and I'm sure this is a verry apprecitivewrite frfor the guys from the guys.
huggs, big smioes,
emy |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:46:07 PM AEST
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Ssssssssssorry folks, haven't slept today.
Pl;ease 4 give the mess ups.
nite all |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 12:05:39 AM AEST
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wow Sue what a awsome write.
I am sure Billy and paul will love it.
big hugs |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:02:49 PM AEST
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~*Suzie Q*~ the cheerleader o' love, and a danged good cheer at that! Good wordsmithin' fer the boys.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:31:29 PM AEST
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Once again u not only pened your magic but did it in the name of love and 4 others. this is beautiful sue, i'm sure they will appreciate it.
truly a love peice of writting holding the magic wand of kindness.
(((((Sue)))))))
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by brew on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:37:47 PM AEST
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Wow.Given from one selfish heart, to two others.......!!!!!!!! What bliss, and yes, they are deserving what makes the smiles reappear on the face.! You have PUT that there reguardlss, if it is from a fellow writer, or deep friend. JUST WOW> Always love to read something given for another to enjoy.
Hugs
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:58:09 PM AEST
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What better affirmation than this Sue..could either
of us ask from someone who's not only been a constant.. but a relative to support to ALL her friends!!
"Take note people!"
(though you need not...)
knowing already, how special she is!
*thanks everyone, for the kind words..*
All my love to YOU Sue...and to all!!
Billy ..AKA ..Man On High |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by wizard on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:19:18 AM AEST
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wow sue! this caught me totally by surprise...i am left a bit speechless, but will give it my best. i am completely humbled by this, as well as everyone's kind words in their comments..i cant really tell you how much this means to me...and i know bill feels the same.
i will indeed heed your advice well, and "believe in my dreams"...
oh, and by the way...this poem was completely beautiful...i loved every line!!
hugs,
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:17:50 AM AEST
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Susie Q~
This was one of the most altruistic pieces I have come
across in quite a while. A beautiful write, full of
beautiful sentiment. Your sweet way with words is
matched only by your generosity of heart.
Billy and Paul, though hardships endured, have
become two of the most wonderful people I know.
And yes, the wish you have for them is most sincere
and deserving. I would only alter it, in that I should
wish it for all of us. Each and every one.
Great write, sweet girl.
*hugs*
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 07:58:45 PM AEST
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You are so wonderful, such a lovely writer, and so much talent you do have. You are filled with so much love for others and you bring out that love in words to share to two most beautiful people, and that love adds up to you. I so love these two stanzas which makes it so positive and so happy, to be joyful in knowing there is always more in life to come, bless you dear sister.
Believe in your dreams again
True love is in store for you
You have such a willing soul
That will help see you through
The moon and the shining stars
Open up the doors for chance
Where love shall meet eternity
And you a wild and hot romance
rL
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:07:30 AM AEST
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Sue; you are a tirelessly sweet person...always hoping the best for others. We all love you for that! This is such a nice gesture, and beautiful poem for two very sweet and deserving guys....Well done Sue!
*Big hugs to Sue who she's missed*
Scorp : ) |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 11:26:59 AM AEST
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| The encouragement you give to me and others always causes me to smile. You are a very inspirational poet. Thank you for thinking about us, this is something i will try to emulate more. |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:44:55 PM AEST
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VERY lucky guys!!!! to have this.....THIS come from you!
I am envious!!!!! but happy for them.
Awsome encouragement! |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 12:20:57 PM AEST
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How encouraging to help others when you yourself are feeling your own pain dear Susie. "What an encouragement for YOU too dear friend!
"For those that bring sunshine into the lives of others.......cannot keep it from themselves!
You're learned this quite well.
Good for you!
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 07:35:24 PM AEST
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Truly a constant source of beautiful insperation and creative magic you pen. This was a lovely gesture of campasion. Her's to
true artist.
myheartsvoice |
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Re: ~*Where Love Meets Eternity*~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 03:17:50 PM AEST
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dearest sue for others you are always so kind, this is beautiful! i love your poetry:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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