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Those Eyes
Contributed by
big_B
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Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:01:39 PM in AEST
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those eyes are like two glowing moons after the sunset
those eyes made me melt like cold icecream in the soothing sun
those eyes, they are my sanctuary from it all
those eyes are so beautifal and pretty
they makes those words seem ugly
when my life is goin crazy, one simple glance at those eyes fixes me right up
those eyesare all i need to get through it all
everytime she batts her eyes, my body quivers in shock as i just stair at her
those eyes
those lovely eyes
thosebeautiful eyes
i love them and i love you
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2006-06-08 22:01:39]
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Re: Those Eyes
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:43:57 PM AEST
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A cute and romantic write. The eyes can say alot about somebody. I thoroughly enjoyed ur write. Thanks so much for sharing it.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by Alison on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 12:22:42 AM AEST
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| a very sweet and strong write! awesome job!!! |
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