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6706 And you were gone.
Contributed by
ham323
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Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:47:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This reality is so unreal.
As you disappeared from sight.
I’m still waiting just to feel.
This day just hasn’t gone right.
Emotions buried so deep.
I couldn’t hope to relive again.
But now you enter eternal sleep.
And they resurfaced to the devils playpen.
The chaos that torments my mind.
You were my weakness that I never knew.
Your gentle nature left me so blind.
I never thought this nightmare could come true.
You left without hesitation.
How could you be so sure.
That it was just the situation.
When you have yet to endure.
This pain runs deep inside.
Nestled closely amongst my core.
Now that you are no longer at my side.
I’ve lost it all and more.
Did you ever stop to think.
What an effect this would have on me.
Life’s bottle drained of it’s ink.
To live again you are not worthy.
I whispered a selfless prayer.
That God may have mercy on you.
Right into the thin air.
But I forgot that fairy tales weren’t true.
You were my only hope left.
And now you are gone.
I accuse you of theft.
You stole my heart from which you belong.
R.I.P. Ben 6/7/06
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ham323
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Re: 6706 And you were gone.
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 01:45:54 PM AEST
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Wow, I am truly sorry for your loss. My thoughts and prayers go out for you and his family.
RIP
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Re: 6706 And you were gone.
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by MarLites on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for you loss. Not a whole lot anyone can say. Thanks for writing this poem
Mrs. Mary |
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Re: 6706 And you were gone.
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by bronzen on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:22:56 AM AEST
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| i experience loss so i know the feeling but i am sorry for yours |
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Re: 6706 And you were gone.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:16:49 AM AEST
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My condolences on the loss of ur friend. My prayers go out to u and Ben's family. May Ben forever rest in peace and may God give you the strength to get through ur loss, Amen.
big heartfelt hugs for u,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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