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I love her like i love to sigh
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:42:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Let the snow decide to melt
upon her skin of violet felt
I am just the soul that falls to sin
She watches me paint the sun
Hugging nothing but the gun
I am just the blue paint in the sky
I love her like i Love to sigh
Melting memories I deny
I am just a line away from dying
Fold myself into the plane
that crashes into one more vein
how did summer turn to black so fast!!??
Dim the lights i see no form
Shifting weight i breath no more
how did i become addicted glass!??
Now i'm painting one more cloud
Descending into no more sound
I am just the angel crying now...
dw
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Re: I love her like i love to sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:45:29 AM AEST (User
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Dwayne~
Where have u been stranger? It's great to see a new post by u. I have missed reading ur awesome work.
A most impressive piece of poetic art, although pain and sadness ring out aloud from it. Like one is struggling to free themselves.
Now i'm painting one more cloud
Descending into no more sound
I am just the angel crying now...
A vivid picture u paint into ur readers head. A real thought provoking piece of writing. Your outstanding poetry is always well worth the read DW~ A most talented and gifted writer who has such a flare with a pen.
Good to see ya posting again my dear friend.
love n hugs,
~*suzie Q*~
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