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inside your twisted mind
Contributed by
safewaygirl1439
on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:07:08 AM in AEST
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Inside your twisted mind, you can no longer hide,
the hatred you harbor deep inside.
I've got no more strength left to argue and fight,
your disease has taken over this last chance for life.
I was ready to be your loving wife,
until you transformed and lunged at me with that butcher knife.
I didn't say a word, that you swore you heard,
this behavior has become extremely obsurd.
Try to get a grip of control,
before you lose your entire soul.
I still love you, no matter how your brain unfolds,
but I need to leave now, to spare my life and my soul.
I leave you with these last words, I LOVE YOU, and thats what really hurts.
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Re: inside your twisted mind
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by Jim-Torres on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 12:15:26 PM AEST
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| this is sad. you did a good job letting the reader know how you feel. this one really hit home with me cuz i have a cousin thats kind of like that. and it pains me that he's going through that. |
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Re: inside your twisted mind
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by darkness_angel on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 12:42:02 AM AEST
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| i really like your poem, you can express how you feel very well and you can make other people feel it as well. |
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