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Rhapsody
Contributed by
Sasha
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Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 11:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Keeling to his center, I find my heady rhythm,
My senses holding me in a midnight's rhapsody.
I dance summer thoughts into his sweet slumber,
To waltz him out of his beloved's night-arms,
To take him away on lust's signature rasp,
To speed wanton mirth through his dark eyes,
Brooding in their want, their despair for me...
I step lush desires in his warm breath,
On sun drenched caresses at my cool brow,
I lose myself in his silken voice,
And fall into life's hollow at winter's lonely east...
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Sasha
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2006-06-07 23:25:48]
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Re: Rhapsody
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 03:05:04 AM AEST
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Very beautifull. It comes alive with the reader.
great work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rhapsody
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by blackprayer on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 09:12:22 AM AEST
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| It is definitely descriptive. I did enjoy it and it has an interesting flow to it, a good flow though. :) |
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Re: Rhapsody
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:27:11 AM AEST
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| Almost a haunting or enchanting type of romance...wonderfully put! |
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