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DRY YOUR EYES
Contributed by
roxygirl
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Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 09:06:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Don't cry no more dry your eyes
All you need to do is hold on tomorrows a better day
The light will shine
I know life is a struggle
Huslten for some money
I know its ruff on those street your runen
But you got to be strong
Got to fight the pain away
I pray day after day to help you stay for one more day
I feel you fading away
My heart has too much stress in its vains
Wishing you were here so you can hold me
I feel so weak I can't breath
It's like I'm at the bottom of the ocean with a 100 bl whiet holding me down with no air in my lungs
I'm blowin smoke to my brain
I can't handld this pain
Please don't cry just dry those eyes
I here till I die
You can relie on me no matter what we been through
I got your back through thick and thin
In and out of the haspitle thats how it seem
I try to fight my tears away
So I don't look weak
I don't wont you leave
All I want is to feel is your hand in mind just like went i was a little girl
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Re: DRY YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:35:01 AM AEST
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I think you have some potential here for a great write. The misspellings are numerous and though at times seem intentional, I tend to think it would read better if they were corrected.
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Re: DRY YOUR EYES
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:54:30 AM AEST
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