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Losing Touch of Reality
Contributed by
BrokenXByManyX
on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 08:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everyday you see the places
The new, the old, and the horryfing faces.
Have you ever wondered why there here?
It seems you have nothing left, not even a tear.
The people, the places, are they real?
The thing you smell, the things you feel?
To slip into the parallel world is easy you see.
So take my hand and come along with me.
Copyright ©
BrokenXByManyX
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2006-06-07 20:08:43]
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Re: Losing Touch of Reality
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by big_B on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:12:22 PM AEST
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hey its me big B
i thought that was pretty darn good, short but still good
post me
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Re: Losing Touch of Reality
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by big_B on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:12:45 PM AEST
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hey its me big B
i thought that was pretty darn good, short but still good
post me
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Re: Losing Touch of Reality
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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| Great write. I, and i expect many others, can identify with it. |
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