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You Leave and So Do I
Contributed by
xxTiaxx
on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 01:51:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Now that you're here you cannot leave
You're the only thing that can make me happy
It hurts to say goodbye
Stay here with me
Push me, pull me, beat me
It doesn't matter
I can't just move on
It doesn't work like that
there is no one like you
It's really good to hear your voice
Saying my name
It sounds so sweet
If you leave me right now,
then I am going too...
Copyright ©
xxTiaxx
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2006-06-07 13:51:50]
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Re: You Leave and So Do I
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by Remi on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:04:33 PM AEST
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| great write more imagey in the writing but it good |
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Re: You Leave and So Do I
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by Shyne on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:27:50 PM AEST
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| I like it ....It's different...Keep doin what u do!!!!!!!! |
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Re: You Leave and So Do I
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by bronzen on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 03:44:57 PM AEST
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| yes good write with imagination |
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Re: You Leave and So Do I
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by ham323 on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:03:32 PM AEST
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| I can relate to the ending "If you leave me right now, then I am going too..." Yeah... |
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Re: You Leave and So Do I
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:46:03 AM AEST
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| short and sweet :) |
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